In my book im thinking of playing around with the idea of switching points of view throughout the book. Id like to switch them between my two main characters Ian and Ish. But the problem is Ish will only be switched to once awhile. So my question......
Hi, Newbie here :), I have a quick question for those more experienced than I. I have been trying to track down the effects of drinking a mixture of powdered street heroine and water. I am most interested in whether the effects would be......
In one of my stories, the protagonist is a member of a race of elf-like beings who have power over moonlight and usually act as servants/bodyguards/healers to vampires. When he was a kid (about 8 in human terms) his parents died in a car accident,......
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Hey, everyone. I'm working on my first novel, an urban fantasy/mystery set in Seattle. I've got the basics pretty much worked out. I know who my characters are, I've got the magical details all ironed out, and I know who dunnit, and how it was......
Ok this is something that's bugging me... My scene: Hero is looking for MC. MC works as volunteer at an asylum, goes back home by foot at night, is attacked by two creatures that are a mix of reptilians and canines created by a vampire from......
Recently had a question about paragraphing on another critique site and someone was helpful enough to point out the main problem being that I'm giving readers facts without emotional support. Do you ever find yourself doing this? The paragraph in......
Writing this one novel and one of the characters is very plain looking despite her role as one of the main characters. I have my own opinions of what looks plain looking but I want to get more opinions from others. So far I have heard things from......
I am scared to post, insecurity abounds so please be gentle. I have been reading the posts and enjoying all the view points. One of the posts I read states that a new author should not write a trilogy. My problem is that I have 3 stories (all......
So sitting in a cafe yesterday I managed to write a good few pages of story (what is it with coffee shops and inspiration?) got home and now have to type up everything from the hand writing. It ocured to me that maybe if I scanned in the hand......
Hi! I am an aspiring writer from Canada in desperate need of assistance in honing my craft. Despite the fact that I just finished my first year of university as an English literature student, I really haven't attempted much creative writing in the......
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Hello, the name is Strude and I'm a casual writer. I'm twenty-fours years old, I live in Canada, and I'm a graphic communication student. In recent years I haven't written to many stories, least of all completed ones, but I have had my fair share of......
Are you night writers or day writers?? Where do you prefer to write and what is your writing comfort zone like? What is funny is I prefer to write when there are people around me being productive or in the middle of the night when it is quiet......
Actually I am just another new guy.. who knew? I am in the process of writing my first short story and I am looking for some help/ideas. I definitely did not go to college for writing or anything like that, just an amateur here. You can read what......
Lately, I had been reading my old work and now, I can see some improvement. Some of the work I found laughable, I seemed to start seeing a style that works for me. Of course, I can still get better, you never stop learning. For all of you writers,......
Hi, My name is Tyler. I write about the things I don't say out loud. Also, I would like to travel through space...eventually. That's a big one....
Meet Blue Stasz - this is my pen name since I discovered that my first and last name usually cause some spelling trouble ;) I was born and raised in Germany and moved to a Dallas suburb in April 1998. My husband Tony (who is from England) and I......
Hi everyone, After daydreaming my way through the last few years of school and most of university I've finally finished my exams and started putting my incoherent thoughts and scribblings into something more tangible and, hopefully, readable.......
OK, in this one story, I have three shapeshifters, each of which can turn into big cats at will. One turns into a cheetah, one a lion, and one a leopard. In order for the main plot to take place, they have to decide that they'll live civilization......
I'm interested in finding out if anybody has been trying out the Storyaday (http://storyaday.org/). A lot of my friends have been talking about it and shooting out stories like crazy with the writing prompts. Gets your creativity going when......
I must say I sincerely dislike the introductory or the 'About Me' pages. It's difficult enough getting words out in day-to-day conversations, but to have to condense my awesomeness into a tiny post of a few hundred words is nigh impossible. And......
I'm hoping one of you may know of an online resource that would include a fairly comprehensive list of (fantasy) fiction archetypes... I've been......
Hi, I have a plot layered out and I was wondering where would be the best place begin the actual story as in a first chapter, here is a quick outline......
Welcome to the Rin'ov Dulezz Discussion Thread! Sorry for the delay but there was difficulties. Now the Games con really begin! *Name:* Arriana ......
I'm a college student studying English and French. Summer vacation just started for me (die finals, die) and I would like to get back into writing......
I'm in the process of drafting a world and characters for that world, and I've run into a fairly big landmine here. There is one character. He's......